My First Clip: Old School, New Students

Written by Michele T on September 25, 2007 – 2:11 am -

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Michele L. Tune


In keeping with the theme of writing as another writer/blogger friend, Becca, advises (and my other writer/blogger friend, Julia, so graciously reminded me), I have decided to share an essay that was published in last year’s Progress Edition of my hometown Newspaper.

(Don’t critique me too harshly! This was my first published piece.)

“Old School, New Students” *

By

Michele L. Tune

When I think of (my hometown) and the surrounding Ozark area, I envision clear rivers and streams freely flowing–Children wading in the shallow water’s edge, inner tubes and boats filled with families and pets taking in the picturesque scene as the river carries them out of view. Closing my eyes, I can almost smell the cedar and pine trees after a rain and oh, the abundant wild life scampering in the forest, as well as in plain sight, is the icing on the cake!

But, I also see a way of life that is dying, an old-fashioned path of yesteryear, of days gone by–the simple things in life like honesty, integrity, humility, true friendship, neighbors helping neighbors, a hard, faithful work ethic, a youthful zest for life, joy for a new day at the breaking of dawn… Watching the sun come up as a sweat breaks on the brow, but smiling because of the heart-filled pride of having a job and supporting or contributing to the family. The old school: Almost extinct, sadly endangered like so many rare species of animals and wild life. What to do?

Looking around I see fine folks like Ms. Garnet Hunt White. What a beautiful lady! A retired schoolteacher, well-known published author, strong pillar in our community, resilient, wise–so full of knowledge! With so much to teach and share and such a youthful energy to experience what each new day has to bring, she is a role model to me as well as anyone who wishes to take a moment to study her life. Taking each day by storm, she lives life to the fullest never wasting a moment.

As she sat at my dining room table recently, her advice to me was, “Michele, write down the stories your mother and father tell you. They’ll be gone one day and you’ll wish you had taken the time to document what they know. I wish I had written down more of what my mother told me; I’ve now forgotten some of what she said.”

“The tradition and wealth of knowledge that can be passed on is a priceless treasure that money can’t buy”, Ms. White shared.

I will forever treasure her advice and most definitely, I will follow it! Time is slipping through our fingers like sand in an hourglass. So precious is the time we have on earth, the opportunities that we have to make a difference, to love, share, give, and learn…

So many people today feel that they know it all, that there’s nothing they can learn. But they are so wrong. The reason Ms. White is such a remarkable lady is because she’s open to learning something new each and every day! And though she is a retired schoolteacher, she still desires to be taught and that is a valuable trait to have.

As father time presses on - tick… tock… tick.. tock… - I desire to fill the “old school” to capacity with a classroom of new students. The generation that is leaving us is priceless and rare and in order to keep the Ozarks and the world the way we love them, we need to forge on and instill in this younger generation lessons that will not only withstand the test of time but also make our time here more valuable and enjoyable.

Broken homes, families, lost children, shattered dreams… It’s everywhere. But it’s not too late to try and rebuild what has been torn down because our teachers are still present; it’s the class that has been “playing hooky”.

I challenge our community to raise its standards in all aspects. I challenge our elders to “give it all you’ve got” to instruct the younger generation. And, I challenge our youth to surrender your will and open your heart and mind to learning, while taking notes.

The Ozarks are beautiful and ever changing; life is even more beautiful. And with the magnificent country and unique individuals like Ms. White as my inspiration, I know I’ve yet to experience all the great things life and (my hometown) have to offer me.

Several months ago, as my mother read the Writer’s Guild meeting announcement in The Prospect-News, she said, “Michele, you’re going to that meeting.”

Of course, I laughed but as always, “Mother knows best…”

Gratitude doesn’t begin to describe my appreciation of her. From nursing me during years of sickness, surgeries, and depression to the encouragement and support she has given me daily, my mother is the reason I’m alive and pursuing my dreams today.

You see, my dreams were once shattered. I am a survivor of domestic violence and my past is filled with violent pain and bad memories. But as I sit here at the computer with tears filling my eyes, I am overwhelmed with a sense of hope as my pain transforms into strength and my once forgotten dreams rise from deep within.

My dream since childhood was to be a published author. And as I type this article for the newspaper, I realize that dreams do come true–even lost and shattered ones.

Ms. White and all the ladies of the local Writer’s Guild have forged ahead of me, accumulating educational knowledge of life and I now have the great opportunity to draw from their experiences. Through their writing, I have come to know them personally. Their words are so vivid, it’s as if I’ve always always known them. Retired schoolteachers, inspiration, and cherished friends, I love and appreciate them each and every one.

Ecclesiastes chapter three verse one says, “To every thing there is a Season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven…”

With the changing seasons, nature takes winter and gives us spring. An entire generation is leaving us. The question is, “Will we glean from them and pass along those past treasures to the coming generations?”

Let us walk this path behind them with pride. Fresh dreams and goals are there for the taking, new memories, new lessons to be learned from the old school, and the new…

* First appeared in The Prospect-News, Progress Edition, November, 2006

And, there you have it. I hope you enjoyed my first published piece! Do you remember your first published piece? What was the title? What was it about? Do you want to share it on your own blog?

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    10 Comments to “My First Clip: Old School, New Students”

    1. Renie Burghardt Says:

      Hi Michele,

      This was wonderful the first time I read it, when I didn’t even know you yet, and it’s still wonderful! I’m glad you’re sharing it.

      Blesings,

      Renie

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    2. Michele L. Tune Says:

      Hello Renie,

      Thanks for the kind comment! I’m glad you enjoyed it (again) ;-)

      Smiles,
      Michele

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    3. Rebecca Laffar-Smith Says:

      This is a lovely piece. :-)

      What was my first published article? *ponders* Actually, I can’t remember.

      I DO remember the first time I got paid to write because I had to follow up that day with a personal essay about the shattering reaction of my husband (now my ex) who didn’t see what a big deal it was and made me feel pretty pathetic to be so excited.

      My first ‘in print’ was a poem when I was twelve. It’s still one of the poems in my archives I’ll always treasure.

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    4. Michele L. Tune Says:

      Hi Rebecca,

      I’m glad you liked my essay!

      I’m also glad you didn’t let your ex-husband put a damper on your writing. You persevered, and your writing is great!

      Thanks for sharing, and that’s so sweet that your first poem was published when you were twelve!

      Smiles,
      Michele

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    5. deborah wilson Says:

      Michele,

      My opinion is that it is a good piece. It appeals to me because the words ring true, the old school, does seem to be dying. I too had a teacher such as Ms. White, her name was Ms. Katherine Rollins. These women (and men) are the backbone of our society and are often a child’s predominant role model, paving the way toward an encouraged lifetime of learning – not to mention social stability. Sadly, too many in today’s generation holds little respect for them.

      Good moral ethics start in the home – if not, someone in society needs to be there for these kids.

      It reminds me of the old African adage, “It takes a village to raise a child.”

      Your essay reminds us of the value of continuous learning and our oftentimes resonsibilites as a community.

      :)

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    6. Michele L. Tune Says:

      Hi Deborah,

      Thanks for sharing about your own “Ms. White”, and your views on the “old school.”

      Actually, when this piece came out, a lot of people that read it thought the author was in her fifties! ha ha! I’m not in my fifties, that was a shocker to them ;-)

      You’re right, though, a large part of this generation holds little respect for our elders that stood so strong and wise in their time.

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    7. Becca Says:

      Michele, I really enjoyed this, and feel so much of it applies to everyone of us. Your love for your hometown is evident, and it sounds like a wonderful place to grow up.

      How fortunate you were (are) to have mentors and friends like Garnet Hunt White, and of course the support of your mom.

      Thanks for sharing this – what a lovely piece to have as your “first.”

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    8. Michele L. Tune Says:

      Hi Becca,

      Thank you for your kind compliments, I appreciate your sweet words.

      Yes, the Ozarks and country life in general are beautiful. It seems so much of the land, animals, wildflowers, herbs, trees, etc., are being pushed out of the way by man’s desire to build bigger buildings…

      I am a country girl at heart, always will be ;-) There’s just something about the whippoorwills, deer, rabbits, and all the other “critters”, not to mention rivers and streams with clear, running water….

      Yes, I’m fortunate to have mentors (especially my Mom!).

      Renie Burghardt (Renie Burghardt’s World, listed in my “Fun & Interesting Links”) is a dear writer friend/mentor as well.

      Smiles,
      Michele

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    9. julia ward Says:

      Thanks for sharing! I grew up in a tiny town with Miss Bradish – my first grade teacher, Mrs. Bender – my second grade teacher, and the list goes on, and on. All these women invested themselves in our small futures. They are the unsung heroes that made our country strong and vibrant. We need to return to their values and be proud to carry on their legacy!

      I tutor Learning Disabled children in reading and I always tell them, “Anyone can have a disability – but there’s no excuse for not having good manners and learning how to read and write!”

      Keep up the great posts!

      blessings,
      julia
      julia ward – a BLINDING heart – a writer’s blog
      http://www.ablindingheart.com

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    10. Michele L. Tune Says:

      Your welcome, Julia, I’m glad you enjoyed it.

      I can remember all my teachers’ names too!

      I agree that we need to “return to their values and be proud to carry on their legacy!”

      How awesome that you tutor Learning Disabled children!”

      That’s right, we should always mind our manners ;-)

      Thanks for stopping by!

      Smiles,
      Michele

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